In many parts of world there is continuos coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.

In many Nations, the television shows too much
sport
in different parts of days, as a matter of fact, some people think
this
situation could lead to discourage young people from practising sports.
First
of all, it needs to understand the reason why there are a lot of
sport
programmes on television.
For example
, the teenager could be fun watching sports or they could have a particular passion for one of them.
Moreover
, the huge quantities of
sport
on
TV
may courage young people to watch unknown
sport
, developing it. It's true that these programmes aren't cultural ones, but at the same time we can see a reduction of trash transmissions and
sport
is better than them because the young people could imitate the behaviour of people of trashy programmes. Anyway, I agree with the point of view that too much sports on
TV
is bad because a young could be alienated, in fact a professional is better than you, so you could never believe in your capacity.
Although
,
this
is a problem due to society, not to
sport
: a person could practise an activity, a hobby because he is interested in it, not to be the best or better than others. The society changes
this
, making competitive everything. I believe the main problem of sports in television isn't about the behaviour of young people, but it is an economic issue: athletes earn too much money and on
TV
there are few movies,
thus
decreasing independent films. Summing up, it's important to reduce the hours of sports in
TV
, but at the same time we could create a new culture of
sport
founded on the fun and on the passion, not on the money.

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Example:

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