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In many parts of world there is continuos coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.

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In many Nations, the television shows too much
sport
 in different parts of days, as a matter of fact, some people think
this
 situation could lead to discourage young people from practising sports.
First
 of all, it needs to understand the reason why there are a lot of
sport
 programmes on television.
For example
, the teenager could be fun watching sports or they could have a particular passion for one of them.
Moreover
, the huge quantities of
sport
 on
TV
 may courage young people to watch unknown
sport
, developing it. It's true that these programmes aren't cultural ones, but at the same time we can see a reduction of trash transmissions and
sport
 is better than them because the young people could imitate the behaviour of people of trashy programmes. Anyway, I agree with the point of view that too much sports on
TV
 is bad because a young could be alienated, in fact a professional is better than you, so you could never believe in your capacity.
Although
,
this
 is a problem due to society, not to
sport
: a person could practise an activity, a hobby because he is interested in it, not to be the best or better than others. The society changes
this
, making competitive everything. I believe the main problem of sports in television isn't about the behaviour of young people, but it is an economic issue: athletes earn too much money and on
TV
 there are few movies,
thus
 decreasing independent films. Summing up, it's important to reduce the hours of sports in
TV
, but at the same time we could create a new culture of
sport
 founded on the fun and on the passion, not on the money.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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