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Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a negative or a positive development?

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A word education is very popular with young generations nowadays. Everyone wants to study, because knowledge is a contribution
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to
 the future. Being educated means success and big opportunities. You are able to choose an occupation, make a career, earn much. Companies demand diplomas, certificates, which verify the person’s status. We
start
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have started
 studying since childhood. The
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 step is school.
There
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Their
They're
 teachers try to give us the basic information about the world structure. They as well teach many subjects that can be useful
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. After
school students
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school, students
 continue getting qualifications at colleges
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universities, academies. Studies become more difficult, but the graduates don’t regret of the time and efforts they spent. People usually have perspective positions. The best candidates get paid well and reach the top of the professional ladder. Self – education is
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 spread among those, who study
themselves
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them
. The individuals read, learn, practice different disciplines. There’s a wide choice: languages, IT, art etc. It depends on your preferences. The epoch of internet allows to find necessary information at once. You don’t need to visit libraries and wait for your turn to take a book. Right at
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home, you
 just click on
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the sites
 and here you are:
manuels
a small handbook
manuals
, electronic newspapers, dictionaries, works of famous writers.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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