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Many people believe that it is important to always tell the truth. In your opinion, is it ever acceptable to tell a lie?

#people #truth #lie
Some people
bielive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
 that always telling the
truth
 - is
fatefull
having momentous consequences; of decisive importance
fateful
faithful
grateful
, some of them,
nonetheless
, express the opposite point of view: telling a "white lie" is acceptable.
Truth
 comes from the heart and soul, it builds a strong trustful relationship between people.
Nevertheless
, not everyone has the talent to directly tell the
truth
, not making resort to a destructive lie. It takes practice and patience to
develope
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
 the skill of delivering the
truth
 with grace. It is essential to be truthful to ourselves,
first
 of all.
The stonger
Suggestion
The strong
The stronger
The stranger
 personality you
are the
Accept comma addition
are, the
 easier it will be to tell the
truth
. In my opinion, those who are not confident enough, who are not brave enough and do not appreciate the others - can't habituate themselves to a "truthful lifestyle".
For example
, I had a friend who always told me how beautiful I am or how
this
 dress fits me. But in fact, I was pretty sizable at that time and I
didn't even thiught
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haven't even thought
didn't even thought
 I was so because of my friend's "motivation".
Then
 I actually recognized that it is not how I
shod
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
 look like so I changed
mu
of me or myself
my
 lifestyle.
It's
Suggestion
It
 was not her fault,
but
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But
 it would be much better If she just told me the
truth
. Oh, girls... Apart from always telling the
truth
, it is an often
fenomenon
any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning
phenomenon
 to tell the "white lie". Maybe it helps in some cases, but eventually, you would have to tell the
truth
. To sum up, it is more efficient to tell the trust. So you will always be tranquil and confident.

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