Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

people

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People

have different views and expectations of how a

celebrity

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should deal with his own fans and media as well.

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there is a cost of being famous and celebrities should understand that a lot of fans are adoring them and following their news day by day

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believe that there are certain lines not to be crossed when it comes to their private lives as

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is considered sort of

harrasment

a feeling of intense annoyance caused by being tormented

harassment

. On one hand

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some people idolize some celebrities and become

obssessed

having or showing excessive or compulsive concern with something

obsessed

abscessed

and so attached to them that they think that it is their right to know everything about their beloved

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celebrity even

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celebrity, even

their private life and he owes them his success and fame

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so a lot of journalists and paparazzi start to supply their audience with 24 hour news about

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of them or themselves

their

favourite

celebrity

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and try to invade their privacy and look for scandals and try to take photos for them in an inappropriate ways without their consent in order to attract more audience.

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sometimes

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increasded

made greater in size or amount or degree

increased

obsession turn to tragedy like the story of

princess

a female member of a royal family other than the queen (especially the daughter of a sovereign)

Princess

diana

English aristocrat who was the first wife of Prince Charles; her death in an automobile accident in Paris produced intense national mourning (1961-1997)

Diana

which had been passed away as

result

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a result

the result

of a car accident when her driver was trying to escape from

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the paparazzi

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another hand

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the other hand

other hand

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i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that private life is sacred and not to be projected to people looking for scandals or for journalists who are looking for traffic on

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of them or themselves

their

websites or

pappers

writing that provides information (especially information of an official nature)

papers

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fame ofcourse

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Fame, of course

fame of course

Fame of course

Fame ofcourse

comes with a price of less privacy for the

celebrity

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but there has to be limits and regulations for the work of the press

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in order

not to harass the private lives of celebrities.

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Also, I

Also I

believe that there must be penalties for anyone who tries to spread fake news and

rumors

gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth

rumours

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or take photos for a person in his home or his family without their consent. In conclusion

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for the reasons

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refers to the speaker or writer

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mentioned

above I

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above, I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that fans have the right to follow the news of their beloved

celebrity

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and

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is the job of the press and journalists to follow famous people

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but there is a very thin line between press work and

harrasment

a feeling of intense annoyance caused by being tormented

harassment

of the private lives of celebrities.