Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

people
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People
have different views and expectations of how a
celebrity
should deal with his own fans and media as well.
Although
there is a cost of being famous and celebrities should understand that a lot of fans are adoring them and following their news day by day
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that there are certain lines not to be crossed when it comes to their private lives as
this
is considered sort of
harrasment
a feeling of intense annoyance caused by being tormented
harassment
. On one hand
,
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,
some people idolize some celebrities and become
obssessed
having or showing excessive or compulsive concern with something
obsessed
abscessed
and so attached to them that they think that it is their right to know everything about their beloved
celebrity even
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celebrity, even
their private life and he owes them his success and fame
,
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,
so a lot of journalists and paparazzi start to supply their audience with 24 hour news about
thier
of them or themselves
their
favourite
celebrity
and try to invade their privacy and look for scandals and try to take photos for them in an inappropriate ways without their consent in order to attract more audience.
but
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But
sometimes
this
increasded
made greater in size or amount or degree
increased
obsession turn to tragedy like the story of
princess
a female member of a royal family other than the queen (especially the daughter of a sovereign)
Princess
diana
English aristocrat who was the first wife of Prince Charles; her death in an automobile accident in Paris produced intense national mourning (1961-1997)
Diana
which had been passed away as
result
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a result
the result
of a car accident when her driver was trying to escape from
paparazzi
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the paparazzi
.
on
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On
another hand
Suggestion
the other hand
other hand
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that private life is sacred and not to be projected to people looking for scandals or for journalists who are looking for traffic on
thier
of them or themselves
their
websites or
pappers
writing that provides information (especially information of an official nature)
papers
.
fame ofcourse
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Fame, of course
fame of course
Fame of course
Fame ofcourse
comes with a price of less privacy for the
celebrity
,
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,
but there has to be limits and regulations for the work of the press
inorder
Suggestion
in order
not to harass the private lives of celebrities.
Also i
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Also, I
Also I
believe that there must be penalties for anyone who tries to spread fake news and
rumors
gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth
rumours
,
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,
or take photos for a person in his home or his family without their consent. In conclusion
,
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,
for the reasons
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
mentioned
above I
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above, I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that fans have the right to follow the news of their beloved
celebrity
and
this
is the job of the press and journalists to follow famous people
,
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,
but there is a very thin line between press work and
harrasment
a feeling of intense annoyance caused by being tormented
harassment
of the private lives of celebrities.
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  • invasion of privacy
  • personal space
  • media scrutiny
  • mental health
  • public figures
  • relentless pursuit
  • legal implications
  • ethical considerations
  • tabloid journalism
  • financial gain
  • public interest
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