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some people say that success of a person can to determined based on the possessions they have , others say that true success cannot be measured with money. what do you think ?

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In today's world, everyone dreams of being successful in
life
. The measure of being successful can be measured by various ways.
Although
, some individuals believe that success can be measured in monetary terms and some believe
otherwise
. In my opinion, I think success should not be measured in monetary terms, rather the contentment in
life
 and good health should determine the level of accomplishment for an individual.
To begin
 with, it is very vital for a person to be content in
life
.
This
 is because, if an individual is happy he would be able to enjoy all the benefits of
life
 which would bring him happiness.
For example
, a tea shop owner near my house is very content with his
life
, as with his earnings he is able to take care of his family.
In addition
, having all the money in
life
, but not having a peaceful and a happy
life
 can
also
 lead in causing dissatisfaction.
Secondly
, for an individual to enjoy his achievement, it is important for him to be healthy. If a person has all the wealth in the world, but is not able to enjoy due to health problems, the attainment of wealth will be useless. Being successful always refers to having a healthy mind and body. Success can only be sustained if the individual works towards maintaining his work and at the same time by taking good care of his health. To sum up, the measure of the achievement is difficult to be measured in monetary terms. In my view, it would make more sense in measuring success from the content and healthy
life
 a person would be living.
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