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Describe a process of geothermal power plant ? What is the diagram of? How many steps are there? What happens in each step? What are the components, or parts of the process? Is the process mechanical or natural, or both? Where does the process start? Where does it finish?

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The diagram illustrates how geothermal energy is used to generate
electricity
. In general, there are five
distinct
Suggestion
Distinct
 steps the in
proscess
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the process
process
 of
electricity
 production from geothermal power, beginning with the
pumping
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Pumping
 down
of
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with
 cold
water
 and ending with the production of
electricity
 by a generator. At the
first
 stage of the process, cold
water
 pumps
downa
Suggestion
down at
down a
 4.5km long pipe into the injection well. After that, the
water
 goes through an area called
geothermal zone
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a geothermal zone
, which contains a lot of rocks used to
increase
Suggestion
Increase
 the temperature of the
water
. At the
next
 step, the hot
water
 is transferred into another
well
an architectural partition with a height and length greater than its thickness; used to divide or enclose an area or to support another structure
wall
 called the production well where it is
pumped
Suggestion
Pumped
 up in the condenser. In the
consender
an electrical device characterized by its capacity to store an electric charge
condenser
, the
water
 transforms into steam and used to power a
turbine
Suggestion
Turbine
, The turbine activates a generator to produce
electricity
. The resulting
electricity
 is distributed for
different
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Different
 purposes via
electicity
a physical phenomenon associated with stationary or moving electrons and protons
electricity
 grids.
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