Now days we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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Today, every country around the word has a common
problem
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with increasing amount of
garbage
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. These
garbage
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produce
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produces
is produced
in many ways and unfortunately, have
bad effect
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a bad effect
on
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
ecosystems
. If governments and individuals do not try to reduce
this
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problem
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, in
future
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the future
we have more problems. There are many reasons for
increasing amount
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the increasing amount
an increasing amount
increasing amounts
of
rubbish
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.
First
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of all, today, we have more population than the past.
This
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overpopulation produces more
garbage
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.
Secondly
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, as we know nature can absorb all natural things
such
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as foods, vegetables, dead body and so on. All these kind of
garbage
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are
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is
good for nature, but today we
use
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some material like
plastic's
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plastic
bag and nature cannot absorb plastic. We
use
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more and more unnatural elements.
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, people become more consumer than the past. In the past people try to find a new way to
use
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all old stuff, but now we
just looking
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are just looking
just look
for new and better devices. We do not like reuse old
device especially
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device, especially
old electronic device, so just
throw out them
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throw them out
. In my opinion, government should better start to reduce
rubbish
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. They can do it in some simple ways. One of these ways is, teach people to reduce
using
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use
of unnatural material and replace them with something else.
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, we can
use
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paper bag
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paper bags
a paper bag
instead
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of plastic bag in supermarkets.
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Also they
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Also, they
can teach people to dividing their
rubbish
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into natural parts, bottle part and so on.
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, all natural material can
reuse
move upward
rise
again. To sum up, in my opinion, both governments and individuals must pay more attention to reducing
rubbish
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.
Rubbish
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is a big treat for our ecosystem. It causes a lot of
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problem
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problems
such
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as increasing some disease, increasing pollution, so we must collaborate with governments to solve
this
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problem
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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