IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7

Today it is a common practice for many business meeting and business training to take place online. Do advantages out-weight the disadvantages.

#practice #business #place #out-weight
Nowadays, many companies held their meeting and training on video calls or webcams,
this
 has become the common global practice. While these types of get-together, have negatives, it
also
 has positive outcomes.
This
 essay will explain why the advantages of
this
 practice are more developed and thought through that it overrides the disadvantages.
This
 negative aspect of the meetings includes bad connectivity and power blockage. The video calling works because of the
internet
, to conclude
such
 events online would require more power in the
internet
, if the
internet
 is of a lower range there would be chances of bad connectivity and it would lead to not understanding the agenda or training.
Secondly
, most of the countries experience electric breakage, the electricity is blocked during that time and
thus
 these reasons would
also
 contribute towards not having a successful conference. The reason, because
this
 online
conventions
Suggestion
convention
 has become popular across the world is because it has many benefits that support not only the organization but
also
 the world. These webcam forums had people stop unnecessary travelling globally and locally, one can sit in his place, office or home and complete the meeting or the seminar.
As a result
, less travelling equals to a less polluted area.
Secondly
, organizations save a lot of money on these types of programs. They tend to buy a high power
internet
 which enables employee to attend any conference in their comfortable spaces. If the workers are comfortable, there are chances of high productivity in that organization.
Therefore
, the positives of
this
 program are more than its negatives. In conclusion, It has become a regular thing to have a conference and seminars on webcams because of the above reason mentioned.
This
 essay explains how the advantages of the online get together outweighs the disadvantages.
Submitted by write2navleen on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Telecommuting
  • Virtual collaboration
  • Webinar
  • Connectivity issues
  • Interactive platforms
  • Digital divide
  • Synchronous/Asynchronous
  • Eco-friendly
  • Cost-efficient
  • Participant engagement
  • Networking opportunities
  • Skillset enhancement
What to do next:
Look at other essays: