Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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It is actively argued that modern technique which used by big companies for a

seling

the exchange of goods for an agreed sum of money

selling

a product are

contravertiol

marked by or capable of arousing controversy

controversial

and not

benefitial

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

for

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end

customets

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customer

customers

. I

am strongly agree

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strongly agree

with

this

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staitment

a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc

statement

and

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believes

believed

that those approaches for an

advertisment

a public promotion of some product or service

shoud

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

be corrected in a near future.

Firstly

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, some of the most efficient tools for selling a

products

Suggestion

product

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the internet

voilate

fail to agree with; be in violation of; as of rules or patterns

violate

your privacy. It is very common situation when ad company

collectind

the act of gathering something together

collecting

collected

your

personale

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personal e

data for analysing it for their own goal, but you even do not know

this

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, because

thay

people in general

they

are

doint

engage in

doing

silently

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silence

. Those modern techniques build your profile based on private your data, which you wouldn't share with a

complite

having every necessary or normal part or component or step

complete

stranger.

For example

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, there

is faimost issue

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foremost issues

is foremost issue

with the

british

of or relating to or characteristic of Great Britain or its people or culture

British

company, Cambridge Analytics, it had collected data

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about

from

millions

facebook

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Facebook

users,

than

subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)

then

build profile for an each user and produces targeting ads for a manipulation in the USA 2016 election. That's why your data

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the internet

shoud

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

be protected from advertising companies.

Secondly

Linking Words

, the main goal of an

industly

the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise

industry

is to increase a revenue by showing you ads for a goods which you even do not need.

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Moreover there

Accept comma addition

Moreover, there

are huge

amout

a quantity of money

amount

of marketing

compain

an institution created to conduct business

companies

company

that are selling

complitly

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complete

completely

trash, but

regulat

in accordance with fixed order or procedure or principle

regular

people still buying it, because of

stong

having strength or power greater than average or expected

strong

stun

staying

psychological

preasure

the force applied to a unit area of surface; measured in pascals (SI unit) or in dynes (cgs unit)

pressure

pressures

pleasure

from

builbords

large outdoor signboard

billboards

streets

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the streets

bunners

long strip of cloth or paper used for decoration or advertising

banners

in the

intenten

an anticipated outcome that is intended or that guides your planned actions

intention

. Now you just cannot hide from

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ads

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, which

everyvere

to or in any or all places

everywhere

For example

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is very common that someone because a

bancrout

reduce to bankruptcy

bankrupt

because cannot stop

bouying

the act of buying

buying

unnesesery

not necessary

unnecessary

products. So the main goal of marketing is to sell even if it does not need for a

clients

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client

. In conclusion, I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

that latest methods in advertising

shoundn't

should not

shouldn't

be used, because it violate privacy and does not bring value for a society.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

294 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Unethical
Unacceptable
Deceptive
Exaggerated
Misleading
Manipulation
Vulnerable
Targeted advertising
Perpetuation
Societal norms
Stereotypes
Negative body image
Intrusion of privacy
Data-driven
Over-saturation
Desensitization
Annoyance
Greenwashing
Eco-conscious

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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