Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

It is actively argued that modern technique which used by big companies for a
seling
the exchange of goods for an agreed sum of money
selling
a product are
contravertiol
marked by or capable of arousing controversy
controversial
and not
benefitial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
for
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to
a
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an
end
customets
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customer
customers
. I
am strongly agree
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strongly agree
with
this
staitment
a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
and
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
that those approaches for an
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
shoud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
be corrected in a near future.
Firstly
, some of the most efficient tools for selling a
products
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product
in
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on
the internet
voilate
fail to agree with; be in violation of; as of rules or patterns
violate
your privacy. It is very common situation when ad company
collectind
the act of gathering something together
collecting
collected
your
personale
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personal e
data for analysing it for their own goal, but you even do not know
this
, because
thay
people in general
they
are
doint
engage in
doing
in
silently
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silence
. Those modern techniques build your profile based on private your data, which you wouldn't share with a
complite
having every necessary or normal part or component or step
complete
stranger.
For example
, there
is faimost issue
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foremost issues
is foremost issue
with the
british
of or relating to or characteristic of Great Britain or its people or culture
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company, Cambridge Analytics, it had collected data
of
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about
from
millions
facebook
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Facebook
users,
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
build profile for an each user and produces targeting ads for a manipulation in the USA 2016 election. That's why your data
in
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on
the internet
shoud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
be protected from advertising companies.
Secondly
, the main goal of an
industly
the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industry
is to increase a revenue by showing you ads for a goods which you even do not need.
Moreover there
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Moreover, there
are huge
amout
a quantity of money
amount
of marketing
compain
an institution created to conduct business
companies
company
that are selling
complitly
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complete
completely
trash, but
regulat
in accordance with fixed order or procedure or principle
regular
people still buying it, because of
stong
having strength or power greater than average or expected
strong
stun
staying
psychological
preasure
the force applied to a unit area of surface; measured in pascals (SI unit) or in dynes (cgs unit)
pressure
pressures
pleasure
from
builbords
large outdoor signboard
billboards
in
streets
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the streets
,
bunners
long strip of cloth or paper used for decoration or advertising
banners
in the
intenten
an anticipated outcome that is intended or that guides your planned actions
intention
. Now you just cannot hide from
a
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an
ads
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ad
, which
everyvere
to or in any or all places
everywhere
.
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.
it
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It
is very common that someone because a
bancrout
reduce to bankruptcy
bankrupt
because cannot stop
bouying
the act of buying
buying
unnesesery
not necessary
unnecessary
products. So the main goal of marketing is to sell even if it does not need for a
clients
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client
. In conclusion, I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
that latest methods in advertising
shoundn't
should not
shouldn't
be used, because it violate privacy and does not bring value for a society.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unethical
  • Unacceptable
  • Deceptive
  • Exaggerated
  • Misleading
  • Manipulation
  • Vulnerable
  • Targeted advertising
  • Perpetuation
  • Societal norms
  • Stereotypes
  • Negative body image
  • Intrusion of privacy
  • Data-driven
  • Over-saturation
  • Desensitization
  • Annoyance
  • Greenwashing
  • Eco-conscious
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