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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
 To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

#people #waste #homes #governments #requirement #laws
The graph depicts the average monthly temperature for 3 different cities
that is
 London, New York and Sydney with total annual hours of sunshine in a year. January being the
month
 of winter, Sydney is experiencing an average of 26 degrees, which slowly, gradually decreases to all time low in the
month
 of July with 16 degree.
However
, other cities are encountering their all time low by 5 and 8 respectively for New York and London.
In contrast
 to Sydney, New York and London are having their summer season in the
month
 of June and July, with 30 as an average for New York which is highest among all of them. Sharing the same temperature in the
month
 of May and October in Sydney and New York, whereas in London and New York its April and November. As New York being the hottest of the all, having the highest total average of 2535 hours, followed by Sydney by 2473 hours. London is receiving the least
hours
unpleasantly stern
harsh
, making it the coolest of them all.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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