Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in that country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People's interest in learning other than mother
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a mobile mass of muscular tissue covered with mucous membrane and located in the oral cavity
tongue
has
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made greater in size or amount or degree
increased
rapidly over
period
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a period
of time. Despite people argue that
main puropse
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the main purpose
main purpose
of learning
foregin
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
lanugage
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
is travelling and job chances, some
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
belief
that there are other than these
.
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.
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contoversial argument
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a controversial argument
controversial argument
. The main aim of
studing
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
foreign
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foreign languages
a foreign language
language
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is
travel
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and working mainly. The general trend of people is that they prefer
country
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a country
with better
facilites
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
and better life prospects.
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Additionally
, these behaviours are seen among
youth catagory
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the youth category
youth category
youth categories
of people.
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developing and developing countries citizen
are
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is
likely to
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abroad for working purpose by
studing
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
languages which may help them to get jobs and communicate with clients properly. To
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illustrate
, a recent survey conducted by the students of the University Of
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Melbourn
states that out of 100
candiadtes
a politician who is running for public office
candidates
, 90 people
were studing
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was studying
were studying
forgein
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
language
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just to apply for
working visa
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a working visa
.
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people
usally
under normal conditions
usually
aim
developed
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to developing
to develop
to developed
other countries for
travel
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and working as they are paid
handsome amount
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a handsome amount
of money and better life style.
On the other hand
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,
remaning
not used up
remaining
people put forward the contradictory view that people
travel
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to other's for different from employment. Many teenagers and
graduates
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graduate
students mainly handout with
forgein
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
language
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to get better education. To explain
this
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schooling pass out have
mindset
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a mindset
the mindset
of learning non-native
language
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and apply for the
nationa
a politically organized body of people under a single government
nations
nation
national
where they can acquire
better education
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a better education
also
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economic in the most of
cases
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the cases
.
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, Nepali students have
aim
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aimed
to fly to Australia
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
it is
comperative
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comparatively
comparative
cheap and provides
high level education qualification
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a high level education qualification
. A recent report
also
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showed that about 80% of foregin travelling student choose
australia
a nation occupying the whole of the Australian continent; Aboriginal tribes are thought to have migrated from southeastern Asia 20,000 years ago; first Europeans were British convicts sent there as a penal colony
Australia
as their prime destination because of lower expense
.
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.
People
travel
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with strong determination of securing better position and
competant
properly or sufficiently qualified or capable or efficient
competent
knowledge. The majority count of people
have started
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has started
learning other than native
language
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.Though number people argue that people
lerarn
gain knowledge or skills
learn
abroad languages
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abroad, languages
mainly for working;
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however some
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however, some
still
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that they learn for other purpose as well.
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essay discussed both sides of the burning
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prepare and issue for public distribution or sale
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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