You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter 1. describe what you enjoyed about the course 2. say how much cooking you've done since the course 3. suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to share my testimony for the short cooking

course

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making Punjabi curries, which I completed

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your school

last

month.

First

and foremost, I liked the duration and practicality of the

course

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Although

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there were many

dishes

to prepare and learn,

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was extensive enough to cover all.

In addition

to that, I enjoyed learning new ways to prepare

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curries from other team members and learnt to give

personalised

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touch of making

dishes

spicy. Post completion of the

course

, I moved to Europe

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Here I need to cook myself

everyday

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due to my dietary restrictions, but fortunately, because of what I learned from the

course

, I enjoy cooking every day. I try to prepare different

dishes

every alternate day

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I spend 45 minutes cooking daily. Since I enjoy Indian sweets, I am excited to learn to cook deserts especially made from chickpea flour, sugar and condensed milk.

Hence

, I request you to conduct a

course

on the same. I recommend

this

course

to all cooking enthusiasts and look forward to learning new

dishes

in future. Yours faithfully,

Mr.

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Manan Trivedi.