Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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the fact

, that the trend of modern and branded clothes has become an import debate these days. A number of people prefer to wear a modernized and stylish outfits as they considered them a key to success in

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competitive world.

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, I don't agree with

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excessive statement since it

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could have lead to

the perception of the individuals to the negative side and due to

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, they may lose their valuable relationships and dignity in society.

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the adverse impacts of

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lifestyle surplus the positive ones.

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and foremost, the major

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reason for this negative

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trend is that; it kindles a substantial difference in the lifestyle of a wealthy and mediocre person.

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meant that a person who is not earning a massive amount of income and unable to afford expensive clothes easily tried to stay away from his friends and relatives who are considerably rich and can easily purchase top fashionable brands namely, Gucci, Armani, Jimmy Choo, etc.

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,

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major change in their lives badly influences on their social relationships.

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, it will take the viewpoint of citizens towards imperfections path and pushed them to execute deleterious illegal activities, especially those who are poor and want to become reputable.

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; A recent survey report in the USA stated that

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the major crime ratio, particularly

the major crime ratio particularly

in youth

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of fashionable and expensive outfits.

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generate

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generated

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the senses of inferiority complex in their minds and they don't like to get along well with their peers without ravishing formal dresses.

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,

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sort of

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thinking can lead them far backward in their career growth as well as in

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professionally

life.

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illustration; a recent report in

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the Times

of India shows that most of the

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people, celebrities

become

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a psycho sufferer

psycho sufferer

because of their failure in the battle of the popular media world. To conclude, in my opinion, the personality and

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

of the people should not be weighed with their

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costumes, despite

the fact that everyone should be accepted

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by

the way they are.

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, it is

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certainly good to accept the changes of the modern world.