Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

There is no denying
fact
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the fact
, that the trend of modern and branded clothes has become an import debate these days. A number of people prefer to wear a modernized and stylish outfits as they considered them a key to success in
this
competitive world.
However
, I don't agree with
this
excessive statement since it
could have to lead
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could have lead to
the perception of the individuals to the negative side and due to
this
, they may lose their valuable relationships and dignity in society.
Thus
the adverse impacts of
this
lifestyle surplus the positive ones.
First
and foremost, the major
negative reason for
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reason for this negative
this
trend is that; it kindles a substantial difference in the lifestyle of a wealthy and mediocre person.
This
meant that a person who is not earning a massive amount of income and unable to afford expensive clothes easily tried to stay away from his friends and relatives who are considerably rich and can easily purchase top fashionable brands namely, Gucci, Armani, Jimmy Choo, etc.
Therefore
,
this
major change in their lives badly influences on their social relationships.
Secondly
, it will take the viewpoint of citizens towards imperfections path and pushed them to execute deleterious illegal activities, especially those who are poor and want to become reputable.
For instance
; A recent survey report in the USA stated that
major crime ratio particularly
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the major crime ratio, particularly
the major crime ratio particularly
in youth
are owing
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is owing
owes
to the
unaffordability
of fashionable and expensive outfits.
Moreover
, it's
also
generate
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generated
generating
the senses of inferiority complex in their minds and they don't like to get along well with their peers without ravishing formal dresses.
Consequently
,
this
sort of
determental
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
thinking can lead them far backward in their career growth as well as in
profession
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professionally
life.
This
point can be clearly explained by
this
illustration; a recent report in
Times
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the Times
of India shows that most of the
people celebrities
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people, celebrities
become
pshyco sufferer
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a psycho sufferer
psycho sufferer
because of their failure in the battle of the popular media world. To conclude, in my opinion, the personality and
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
of the people should not be weighed with their
costumes despite
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costumes, despite
the fact that everyone should be accepted
with
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by
the way they are.
However
, it is
also
certainly good to accept the changes of the modern world.

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