Some people believe that living and working in the city offers more opportunities for a better quality of life, while others argue that working and living in the countryside brings greater benefits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals agree that living and working in the
city
is good, while
some people
think that dwelling in rural areas
is better. In this
essay, I will explain both views and show some reasons why I chose the first view.
On the one hand, there are many advantages to living in the countryside
. Firstly
, living in the countryside
is a better option and may point to a lower risk of air pollution, which is better for people
's health. Secondly
, housing and daily expenses in the countryside
are much cheaper than in the big city
because the food supplies are mostly self-produced by the community. Moreover
, living in rural areas
has a slower pace of life
which helps people
more relaxing and less stressful work environment. Furthermore
, this
is a small community where inhabitants live close together and interact with each other every day, thereby making personal relationships stronger. Additionally
, living in the countryside
has shorter commutes and fewer distractions which can help people
maintain a balance between work and personal life
. For example
, some schools are very close to villages, so student movement has become easier than ever.
On the other hand
, living in the city
has several benefits. Firstly
, it is easier and much more convenient to get to essential services such
as supermarkets, hospitals and schools. Many necessary services are located in the city
centre where we can reach by public transport like buses within walking distance. Moreover
, people
who live in a big city
can access a larger quantity of job opportunities from big investors, factories and entrepreneurs. For instance
, it is easier for recent graduates to apply for apprenticeships to gain more experience and earn money while
waiting for their main career to be successfully confirmed.
To sum up
, there are both positive aspects of life
in both urban areas
and rural areas
. Therefore
, as far as I am concerned, the responsibility of individuals to make a decision in which area they will live, depending on their life
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Task Achievement
Your essay addresses both sides of the argument and presents a clear opinion, but ensure your introduction clearly states the purpose and scope of the essay. It might benefit from a slightly more engaging opening statement.
Coherence and Cohesion
Most of your ideas are clearly expressed, but watch out for slightly awkward phrasing or repetitive sentences. Vary your sentence structures and word choices for better clarity and fluency.
Task Achievement
You have presented a balanced discussion by covering both views thoroughly and providing your perspective.
Coherence and Cohesion
The essay has a clear structure, with an introduction that introduces the topic and a conclusion that summarises the discussion.
Task Achievement
You have supported each point with examples, making your arguments more convincing and relatable.
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