Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up? Discuss.
The approach of bringing up the children, decides their future. Nowadays, parents are very lenient towards their children and agree to all their requests.
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, to make the current generation children suitable for the future, at times, elders have to be strict with them. Linking Words
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Parents sometimes intermingle love with indulgence. Overindulgence will make the children too much dependent on their parents and they may lack the decision making capability. Linking Words
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, the parents do all the household duties of their children. When Linking Words
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children grow up, they find it difficult to do their work by themselves. Linking Words
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, they do not get the courage to travel to foreign countries for business or study. Linking Words
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, when at work, the working parents do not expect their younger ones to disturb them. To keep them busy, they buy a lot of toys, even when it is not required. Linking Words
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children become greedy and they do not value their possessions.Linking Words
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, one of the famous Bollywood stars, ran in to bankruptcy as he was born and brought up with silver spoon.
To enable a younger one to be of good behaviour and character, parents should take appropriate actions. Linking Words
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, whenever a child makes a mistake, the parents should make them understand the consequences of the mistake, they have made.In that way, the child will be able to comprehend the difference between good and bad. Linking Words
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, children should be given enough responsibility at home. Linking Words
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will make them self-dependent and responsible citizens of the country. Linking Words
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principle has been followed by famous personalities. Linking Words
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, Jackie Jahn donated all his property to the poor people, as he wanted his son to work hard and earn his bread and butter.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate that parental indulgence should be disciplinarian in nature. Overindulgence should be avoided, as it may have a negative impact on the child's future.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...