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Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Introduction: Since many years ago, a lot of people have been deciding on a
career
 path early and follow it as they grow up saying that it provides them with a satisfying life.
However
, while some many agree with
this
, changing jobs may suit others more. On the one hand, it can be said that following a
career
 from early benefits us. Specifically, if we set an achievement for our careers in the early years of our life, we can prepare for it more than a lately set goal.
For example
, if a child
want
Suggestion
wants
 to be a football player, he can prepare for it by focusing more on practicing the sport and working out rather than spending most of his time on academic works. As a
results
Suggestion
result
this
 will help one do better when they start their jobs later. Which, in case of the boy, may lead to a better performance than the others in a try out for a professional team.
On the other hand
, an early work choice may disadvantage us as we grow. As an explanation for
this
, many of us
change
 our hobbies and interests as we grow due to external factors which usually lead to a
change
 of preference for or
career
. And when we
change
 our preferences while we can
change
 our jobs, it can lead to the unhappiness created by doing something we do not like. Conclusion:
Last
 but not least, the sense of achievement in a person’s life does not lie only in the pursuing of a particular
career
. It is
also
 important to listen to ourselves when choosing a job in order to develop a satisfying
career
.
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