some people believe today we have too many choices. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Having different options m
ake
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makes
our life more plentiful, happy and enjoyable. I think being able to choose for your own starts when you are 2 years old and begin building your personality so why would you want to stop deciding what you want to be, eat, wear and even where you want to live? In the past, choosing university careers was very boring and stressful as well.
For instance
, when my parents were young and decided on a career to s
tudy they
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study, they
had limited options, you could be a teacher, like my m
om;
an engineer, like my dad; or a doctor; an accountant or a lawyer, like most of my uncles and aunts. Those were practically the only options.
In contrast
, nowadays, there are so many options that it can be very stressful t
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too, as
you might be afraid of making a mistake and choose something it is not right for you.
For e
xample there
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example, there
are a
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artistic
careers like dancing, singing, painting, drawing, acting; design careers i
nside
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in
architecture to design toys, houses, decoration, furniture. And you still have the traditional choices as medicine, law school, accountancy and chemical or civil engineering. Choosing can be h
ard but
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hard, but
extremely fulfilling and you may make mistakes in
this
c
hoice but
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choice, but
you will always be able to start another career later on. In gastronomy there has been an incredible growth in the choices when deciding what to eat. Not only when choosing the restaurant when going out, where you can decide whether Chinese, Indian, Mexican, Japanese, and even Argentinian food is the right one for that particular date, but
also
the amount of choices you have when you want to cook at home. There have been a lot of advances in the industry and
also
medically speaking i
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on
the nutritional aspects of food. You now can be vegetarian, vegan, have particular allergic restrictions, or eat everything, and there is a market for each one. When I was a child the combinations and plates were very limited, you could choose pasta or meat and veggies, with or without dessert, that was almost always ice cream. Now there is a different option for every day of the week, you can order or cook sushi, raw, organic, Arabian food and many more. Of course the traditional dishes like barbecue, smashed potatoes and salad are still available for you to eat if you prefer. In conclusion, while stressful, having lots of options can make your life much more complete as you get to choose what you want and when you want it and even change if you tried and did not like it.
This
can and should be applied to all aspects of daily and future life choices. Being happy depends on it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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