Many museums charge for admission, while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

The museums in the several places have started to impose the
entry
fees, many people argue that it has the disadvantage of fewer visitors visiting, while
this
essay argues that it has an advantage because it helps the council to take care of it in a better way. On the one hand, many people state that due to
entry
tickets the primary drawback will be the drop in the number of visitors visiting it.
That is
to say, most of the museums exhibits local culture, when
such
public places are free to access for everyone it attracts the variety of audience and visitors that can learn about the history of that place.
For instance
, by visiting the various museums in the Hyderabad, people can come to know the prosperity they had in previous time due to pearl mines if they will impose charge fewer people will be interested.
However
, I believe that the
entry
tickets levied on
such
places are nominal and should not stop anyone from exploring it.
On the other hand
, it helps the Government earn money that can be utilised in bearing the maintenance costs of the museum.
In other words
, these historical sites are too old and requires repair on the regular intervals to keep them up to the mark for visitors, if all the money will be spent from taxpayers' pocket it could be an injustice to them, so if some participation from its visitors could be taken it will help the government to cope up with the expenses.
For example
, in the Rajasthan a city in India, all the major museums in forts are now maintained by the Archaeological Survey of India with some entrance fees that helps to sustain all the exhibits at the balance costs.
Thus
, some participation from its visitors helps. To conclude, imposing
entry
fees on museums might deter the few people to visit them, while in the long run it presents a useful approach for their sustenance.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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