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There are nations who oppose the development of nuclear plants stating that these present much danger to the environment and to the people,especially if they are abused.However,others believe that their development is beneficial.Compare and contrast the pros and cons of building nuclear power plants.

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Nowadays,Humans have created multiple ways to produce
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.Nuclear
power
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 plants are one of those and have gained more popularity ever since it has been developed.
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,there is an inconclusive debate as to whether
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 is hazardous to the environment.In the following paragraphs,the benefits and drawbacks will be outlined in detail.
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 with,the most obvious advantage of nuclear
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 is the fact that it can produce a great amount of
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.
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,countries that construct numerous nuclear
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 plants can reduce the need for other sources.
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,fuel and oil are limited and now have a problem of scarcity so,countries that do not have the ability to drill for oil or gas have to depend on the ones that have.
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,nuclear
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 lasts longer compared to other sources so it can be utilized in submarines.
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,Nuclear
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 has a fatal drawback.
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 is tremendously dangerous to citizens in the vicinity since its
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 can take away their lives and the buildings nearby. One example is the explosion of the nuclear
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 plant in Chernobyl city in Ukraine unfortunately causing thousands of victims to die in agony within three months and many days after .The impact of
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 disaster still has the remaining until today because there are some parts of
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 city that have still forbidden entry for,the concern of remaining radioactive.Scientists expect
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 will
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 long for a century before
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 area will be allowed for humans to live. In conclusion,
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,Nuclear
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 can be beneficial, providing us with an enormous amount and sustainable
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,the negativity can not be overlooked.

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task achievement
Try to elaborate more on the benefits of nuclear energy to balance the discussion. Your essay leans more towards the disadvantages at the moment.
coherence cohesion
Improve transitions between paragraphs and ideas to enhance the flow of your essay.
coherence cohesion
You structured your essay well by having a clear introduction, body paragraphs that discuss both the pros and cons, and a concise conclusion.
task achievement
The historical example of the Chernobyl disaster effectively supports your point about the risks associated with nuclear power. It adds depth to your argument.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nuclear power plants
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • global warming
  • energy security
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear accidents
  • Chernobyl and Fukushima
  • radioactive waste
  • hazardous
  • disposal challenges
  • decommissioning
  • energy production
  • environmental impact
  • public safety
  • sustainability
  • renewable energy
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