Some people argue that the fittest, strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports.but other people think that success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays sports
is getting
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are getting
famous than other activities in the world. Some people claim that healthy and well build players and groups can get more
success
,
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,
whereas other people cite mental attitude is more helpful to achieve
success
.I think physical
fitness
is more important than mental
fitness
in sports to achieve
success
. On one hand
,
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,
sports is a physical
activities
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activity
so physical
fitness
is very important for it.A healthy man can give more efforts than an unhealthy man.A
person
with well built health
,
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,
have a lot of energy to play a
game
and get
win
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
one
.
For instance
,
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one of the famous cricketer of Bangladesh is
Taskin
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taken
tasking
Tashkent
.He is fit and tall.He can catch
ball
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the ball
easily and out other team player.He can easily use his
fitness
for
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to
win the
game
.
Furthermore
,
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,
healthy people do not get much
sick
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sicker
because they do not have much diseases. Diseases is a big barrier for a sportsman. A healthy
person
have
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has
the immunity power to prevent
body
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the body
from germs or disease
as a result
the
person
can be fit physically and easily can achieve
success
.
On the other hand
,
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,
mental
fitness
is
keep
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keeping
a
person
clam
a weightlift in which the barbell is lifted to shoulder height and then jerked overhead
clean
and polite. It is very helpful in some sports or aspects of sports
such
as chess.A
person
who is mentally not interested in sports or mentally not prepare
,
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,
can never get achievements. Sometimes a
person
can get
success
by using his intelligences.
For instance
, one of my brothers
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,
who is not
healthy but
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healthy, but
he is very intelligent and know how to play chess.He used his brain and techniques in many matches and won
game
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the game
as well as achieve meals in chess. To conclude
,
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,
physical strength gives many advantages in various sports.
physical
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Physical
fitness
keeps people joyful which helps to win
game
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games

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