Some people argue that the fittest, strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports.but other people think that success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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physical strength gives many advantages in various sports.Accept space
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite