Some people argue that the fittest,strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think that success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays sports

is getting

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are getting

famous than other activities in the world. Some people claim that healthy and well build players and groups can get more

success

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, whereas other people cite mental attitude is more helpful to achieve

success

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.I think physical

fitness

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is more important than mental

fitness

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in sports to achieve

success

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. On one hand

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sports is a physical

activities

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activity

so physical

fitness

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is very important for it.A healthy man can give more efforts than an unhealthy man.A

person

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with well built health

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have a lot of energy to play a

game

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and get

win

used of a single unit or thing; not two or more

one

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one of the famous cricketer of Bangladesh is

Taskin

understood in a certain way; made sense of

taken

tasking

Tashkent

.He is fit and tall.He can catch

ball

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the ball

easily and out other team player.He can easily use his

fitness

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for

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win the

game

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healthy people do not get much

sick

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sicker

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they do not have much diseases. Diseases is a big barrier for a sportsman. A healthy

person

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have

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has

the immunity power to prevent

body

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the body

from germs or disease

as a result

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the

person

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can be fit physically and easily can achieve

success

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On the other hand

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however

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, mental

fitness

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keep

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keeping

person

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clam

a weightlift in which the barbell is lifted to shoulder height and then jerked overhead

clean

and polite. It is very helpful in some sports or aspects of sports

such

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as chess.A

person

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who is mentally not interested in sports or mentally not prepare

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can never get achievements. Sometimes a

person

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can get

success

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by using his intelligences.

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, one of my brothers

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who is not

healthy but

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healthy, but

he is very intelligent and know how to play chess.He used his brain and techniques in many matches and won

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game

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the game

as well as achieve meals in chess. To conclude

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physical strength gives many advantages in various sports.

physical

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Physical

fitness

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keeps people joyful which helps to win

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game

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games

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