You recently have completed a course in a training centre in Canada, your friend also wants to do the same course. write a letter to him stating. In your letter - what you did during the course - why you recommend this course - what the possible benefits of this course are.

Dear

Maneel

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Manuel

, I hope

this

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the best of

your

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health and spirit. I’ve recently heard from your mom about

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of your high school studies with a distinction, I must say I am impressed by your hard work. I know now you are looking for the same

course

of study I did in Canada and I’d like to tell you that you are opting for the best. After completion of

this

course

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I’ve got all the necessary practical knowledge and I am doing great with my job. I strongly recommend you

this

course

because of the skills and knowledge that you will gain while the

course

, which will

further

help you in cracking a job interview so easily, that you couldn’t even imagine.

Moreover

, I know there are ample

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options in India as well after your high school but the Indian school curriculum is just focused on theoretical knowledge. As I told you earlier you will acquire practical skills.

In addition

to it, another benefit of

this

course

is that you will get a chance of working in multi-national companies as an apprentice which will act as a backbone to your life.

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the

end

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I want

to

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you to choose

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right path and study hard. Yours lovingly, Jay