You have recently moved into new home. You are planning for a party. However, you are worried about the noise which may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter - Introduce yourself - invite your neighbour - describe the planning of the party and express your concern

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Dear

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Smith, Hi! I am Jay and me along with my family just recently moved

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door to you. It seems like a great location to reside at and

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am extremely

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by the silence and peace which is maintained by

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society. As we just bought our

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home so I think we should celebrate a bit. We are delighted to invite you and your family to celebrate together, in order to get along and know each other.

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a small gathering of around 40 people which includes our family friends and obviously,

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kids. It is happening

tommorow

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night. We have organised some games for the

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children

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children

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in order to keep them busy. The games will include musical chairs and some computer games. As you know its music adds spice to a party I would like to express my concern and want your permission to play some music,

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the clock hits 10. I hope you will understand the situation and would join us for the night to have a couple of drinks. Looking forward to

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you at the party. Yours faithfully. Jay

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