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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

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Many young people are migrating towards cities for their livelihood, leaving behind their parents and loving ones.
This
 essay will discuss problems involved and viable solution.
To begin
 with due to
innovation
Suggestion
the innovation
 of technology growth of metro cities folded many times. In other word, generation of opportunities for employment in cities increases tremendously in the
last
 two decades and it propelled people
leaving
the experience of being alive; the course of human events and activities
living
 in
urban area
Suggestion
urban areas
an urban area
the urban area
 to relocate to
big cities
Suggestion
the big cities
 to earn bread for their family. Apart from that, cutting edge education and outstanding healthcare facilities in giant cities attracts people from
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
. Unfortunately,
this
 migration creates a lot of hardship to seniors who are left behind and they are left with no choice but to lead their life in isolation and detachment. Turning to possible solution, perhaps the immediate step for government would to make small towns more attractive for youngsters.
This
 could be done by transferring few gigantic companies to the countryside and creating umpteen opportunities for small and medium scale business.
In addition
 to that, uplifting the status of education and
healthcare
Suggestion
health care
 facilities will bring down the case of migration. To conclude, old people
plays
Suggestion
play
 a pivotal role in the development of our society because of their sheer knowledge and fruitful experience. The government can tackle
this
 problem by creating more opportunities for young generation living in
rural area
Suggestion
rural areas
a rural area
.
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