A friend had a new born baby, you have picked up a present for the baby and want to visit to give it to him / her. Write a letter to – - Congratulate your friend. - Tell him why you picked up the mentioned present. - Suggest arrangements for the visit.

Dear Dave, Hope
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letter
find
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you in
the
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radiant health and the best of spirit. I'
m
writing
this
letter to greet you on the birth of your child. My joy knew no
bound
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when
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came to know about
this
. I'
m
so glad to tell you that I bought a sleeping cart for your baby. I'
m
also
informing you at the earliest so that you don't spend money on it. I purchased it because I want to be the
first
one to give you
such
sort of gift on
this
auspicious
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occision
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. Fortunately, I
also
got a huge discount on it because of winter sales. I'
m
so excited to meet you that I have already booked a flight
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this
sunday
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. Could you please send someone to pick me up from the airport
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I know there will be too
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guests in your house so
i
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have booked a hotel near your house to avoid any trouble for you. Hope to see you soon! Yours lovingly, Farrukh
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