Nowadays in many countries woman have full time jobs. therefore, it is logical to share household task evenly between man and woman. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
In the 21st century our lives are fast paced and our necessities have gone way above the basic needs of food, shelter, clothes, etc. In order to fulfil our needs and desires, everyone has to
work
harder compared to the previous century. Currently in many parts of the world women have full Use synonyms
time
jobs. Use synonyms
As a result
, their counterparts try to equally share their Linking Words
household
chores and other responsibilities. I totally agree with Use synonyms
this
and in Linking Words
this
essay I will highlight some key points to support my opinion.
The previous century was male dominated, due to these women were mostly responsible for Linking Words
household
tasks. As Use synonyms
time
changed, women are now required to Use synonyms
work
full Use synonyms
time
, to support the needs of her family. Use synonyms
However
the Linking Words
household
chores still remain the same and somebody still has to complete those tasks. It’s definitely not possible for one person to do everything, so it's quite logical to divide the Use synonyms
work
equally among other members of the house. Use synonyms
For example
, if wife cooks dinner, Linking Words
then
her husband can help her with the dishes and cleaning the kitchen. Linking Words
This
way they can complete all the tasks more effectively and still have some quality Linking Words
time
for themselves.
One more point I would like to highlight here is the equality between men and women. Both men and women are equal, so if they are equally sharing the responsibilities of earning and supporting their family. It’s imperative that their Use synonyms
household
responsibilities should Use synonyms
also
be shared. To illustrate, if a man helps her wife with the laundry, Linking Words
then
by no means he becomes less masculine. In fact, by helping her out he is proving to be a better and more supportive life partner.
In conclusion, like other tasks of the outside Linking Words
work
, the Use synonyms
household
responsibilities should Use synonyms
also
be shared equally among men and women. As I discussed above, with changing times women were burdened with more responsibilities of the outside world. And as both men and women are equal, I totally agree that men should evenly help with the Linking Words
household
tasks.Use synonyms
Submitted by cparth90 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite