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Some people say that public libraries are an important public resource and should be free, others say that they are just a waste of public money? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Public libraries are one of the common resource in spreading the education or knowledge among people. I believe that the public libraries should be promoted
instead
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 of thinking they are a waste of money. I will discuss either they are public resource or a waste of money in the upcoming passages. Some people
thinks
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think
 that libraries are believed to be an important part of any education curriculum and should be free. In every curriculum, there is a role of a library like people can visit the place and read their course related books without paying a single penny whatsoever.
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, In our country school students used to get course outline including library name from where they can easily borrow the relevant books for a specific period of time.
Furthermore
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, Construction of libraries
are called
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is called
 to be a
wastage
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waste
 of the public money according to some individuals. How one thing can be a
distaster
a state of extreme (usually irremediable) ruin and misfortune
disaster
 if it provide so much learning material to the user.
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, In
third
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 world
countries people
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countries, people
 discourage construction of libraries in their neighbourhood resulting low literacy rates
of
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in
 the country. To sum up, Awareness and construction of public libraries should be promoted as it
enhance
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enhances
 the intellectual of an individual.
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, It depends on the users that how they evaluate the effect of these resources in their lives.
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