Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is often argued that in some post graduate lectures the amount of gender attendance is quite different. I completely disagree with
this
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opinion and
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
think that it is not due to university qualification for attending to a
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but more about
student
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preference and
futur
the time yet to come
future
orientation
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.
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of all,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that
student
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choose
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chooses
their course
subject
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according their preference. They can choose the
subject
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they want to study and do not attend to other they do not like
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as mathematic because it is too difficult to understand.
This
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method
promote
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promotes
better results for
studentand
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student and
help them to be more focus.
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,
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,
it is reported that
moste
used to form the superlative
most
male
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males
are attracted by engineering than female. The reason of these
result
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results
is due to their education males
prefere
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prefers
prefer
preferred
studies
sometion
at some indefinite or unstated time
sometime
related to
mecanic
the branch of physics concerned with the motion of bodies in a frame of reference
mechanics
mechanical
, cars and aerospace
wherease
on the other hand
whereas
females
prefere
more desirable than another
preferred
prefer
medicine, art and literacy.
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,
this
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constat
an occasion on which a winner is selected from among two or more contestants
contest
is more a stigmatization than the reality. It is for
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reason we can find women in
mecanic
a craftsman skilled in operating machine tools
mechanic
mechanics
course.
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, the choice of lectures
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depends
on their
profesional
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
orientation
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. University
give
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gives
is given
the opportunity to their students to choose their
subject
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. It is on their responsibility to find the most appropriate
subject
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for their profession.
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a
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who
want
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wants
to work as doctor will choose
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subject
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subjects
such
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as chemistry
;
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;
biochemistry
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a
futur
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
future
informatician
a message received and understood
information
will prefer to learn more about
informatic
the sciences concerned with gathering, manipulating, storing, retrieving, and classifying recorded information
informatics
and mathematic than read a book and write
essayes
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essays
for
litteracy class
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a literacy class
literacy class
literacy classes
.
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, it is more appropriate to say that the number people per
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depend on their
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and not their gender. In conclusion, i strongly believe that the number of
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according their gender do not depend on the university decision but on
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preference and work
orientation
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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