some people think that libraries are a waste of ressources and money. so computers should replace them. however,others do not agree. discuss both sides and give your opinion

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Certain individuals believe that libraries must replace with

electronic based computer

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an electronic based computer

electronic based computers

instead

of various

collection

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collections

of volumes.

Nevertheless

, others oppose

this

idea. Computers are not suitable to every person and books are familiar to each one. I believe in the latter because one can

highlights

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highlight

the sentence and all scripts are not available in digital form. All are habituated to

text books

according to or characteristic of a casebook or textbook; typical

textbooks

for any references to clear their doubts

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the subject. Immediately by looking

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the content or appendix page students can clarify their

confusion which

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confusion, which

is not

cleared

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clear

in the classroom

thought

impart skills or knowledge to

taught

by the professor and can underline the particular phrase and note down the unique book code for

further

references.

For example

, my project is on

functioning

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the functioning

of micro controller 8501. In the library I gathered various information from several volumes about the chip in detail which I cannot even find

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the websites. Generally, some people have problems in seeing the computer screen like colour allergy and cause infection to

eyes

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the eyes

. All book volumes are not available officially in the websites and management have to purchase from the website and few authors do not sale their patent rights to any website. They just publish in the paper format so that people can carry

with them to anywhere

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with them anywhere

. These days young people are using various

application

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applications

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there

of them or themselves

their

tablet and mobile phone in order to read

books but

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books, but

libraries are essential for the community to reference of various volumes. In conclusion, in

this

advanced technology

world people

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world, people

are preferring to read stories and news

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mobile phones. But I agree that libraries are not for single

person

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personal

usage it

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usage, it

is for the public and it should not be replaced with computers. I urge

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for

people to spend some time in reading to know about your ancestor culture activities and upcoming information.

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some people think that libraries are a waste of ressources and money. so computers should replace them. however,others do not agree. discuss both sides and give your opinion

Fully explain your ideas

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

In many cities, air pollution is reaching alarming levels, contributing to serious health issues among residents. Identify the key causes of air pollution and its detrimental effects on public health.

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A test for cycling should be mandatory. Do you agree or disagree?

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