Famous people sometimes give their opinion on public topics. Is this a good thing ? Explain to what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Some people think that teaching children
at
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in
one's own
home
is most suited and finest for a child's
development whereas
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development, whereas
other people think that it is better for children to go to school for their
devopment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
. In my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would disagree with the statement that teaching children at
home
is best mainly because of key aspects
such
as parent's
education
To begin
with, teaching children at
home
means that the parents should be able to teach children and make them understand the world better. But, for
this
to happen efficiently, parents should have completed
atleast
upto
higher secondary schooling. If they have not completed schooling properly,
this
inturn
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in turn
hinders the children's
education
and their development. If they teach children with
wrong kind
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the wrong kind
of
education
, it would be tough for the children to rectify it while going to higher standards.
Further
, in
this
contemporary world, it is likely that both men and women go to jobs to provide good
education
and higher standards of living.
Therefore
, it is certain that children would be in the hands of grandparents or maids.
Hence
there is less probability in providing good
education
at
home
to
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for
children.
On the contrary
, if the children
is put
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are put
into schools
suchas
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such as
children's day care to start with, it could have a major growth in children's learning. Usually in schools, there would be many children of
similiar
marked by correspondence or resemblance
similar
age group and
hence
this
type of learning to be in groups have a major impact on children's development.
In addition
to that, most of the schools are coming up with entertaining and innovative ideas
such
as learning by playing games, understanding the children's way of learning and providing
education
to them.
This
kind of innovative methods might engage children and develop their skills better when compared to learning in their
home
. In conclusion, considering the advantages of schools, interactive learning and learning by playing, it would be better to develop the children's learning capabilities by putting them among same age group children rather than keeping
in
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at
home
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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