some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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to the fact that environmental problems are controversial
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there are plenty of reasons given by people and researchers on it
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in
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some
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Some
people strongly believe in the fact that the more we lose particular
species
the more planet earth is in jeopardy.
some
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Some
species
are in danger of
extinction
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extinction, however
however
their existence has a direct effect on environmental problems.
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We
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mankind
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are responsible for
this
loss of
species
due to the unparalleled
haunting ever
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haunting, ever
than before and the global warming which is growing heavily each year because of human beings.
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Some
may disagree
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giving reasonable proofs of what they are claiming.
they
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They
may talk about recycling and unacceptable use of energy and plastic.
they
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They
are not on the same page with the
first
group about global warming
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they believe that it is a natural phenomenon based on climate changing and it is not controllable by
people
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the people
. As both groups support their claiming by logical and scientific statistics
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It is hard to distinguish which causes lead us to be living on a planet with extremely high environmental problems.
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But
to talk rationally
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there is no right or wrong side to take on
this
issue.
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There
are possible reasons
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for
this
problem as much as there are human on the earth.
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In
my point of view
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we, human beings, are the most cruel enemy the planet earth could have ever imagined
of and we can't
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and we can't
blame it on climate changing or many other natural
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phenomena
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The
loss of
species
may not be the main reason leading to environmental problems, but it can be an important one and we should not turn a blind eye to it.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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