The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its future development.

The maps represent the current and the plans for the development of a centre of a town known as Islip.

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present, there is a main road in the centre and shops on either side of the path. On the top, it is the countryside and below the southern shops the area is full of houses.

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, to the South-West of the main road, it extends to the school and towards the

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there is a park for children to play and enjoy.

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, in the future plans, there will be many changes that are going to take place.

Firstly

, the main road is going to become a dual carriageway,

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in the middle it is for pedestrians only.

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, the shops in the southern zone remain the same.

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on the northwest of the path there will be a

bus-stop

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, adjacent to it there will be a shopping centre and

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car parking area.

Moreover

, on the northeast and the southeast side, it will be a new housing zone and the houses in the south will remain the same.

Finally

, the park will be in the southeast area of the carriageway,

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the school is outside

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