Many people believe its better to learn something in a group than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a debate about whether to learn in a group or individually. I have to agree that a
combinaton
a collection of things that have been combined; an assemblage of separate parts or qualities
combination
of
self
study
and combine
study
is better. Let us discuss more about the pros and cons about
this
in the following paragraphs. The
first
thing, man is a social a man.
Soceity
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
Society
exists based on the principle of collectivism. Some people argue that combined studies
makes
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make
a student brilliant in studies than
reading
the sport of siting on the back of a horse while controlling its movements
riding
in a group.
For instance
, a
study
conducted by Indian
Institutional
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Institute
Technology Chennai
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Technology, Chennai
,
releaved
(of pain or sorrow) made easier to bear
relieved
that kids who are sharing knowledge with their peers have a great chance of success in life. By taking
this
into
consideration we
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consideration, we
should encourage our kids to take part in round discussions
,
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,
role plays as part of
eductaional curriculum
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the educational curriculum
educational curriculum
an educational curriculum
.
Groupism
also
imperative to enhance the personality traits of the little people. On the flip side, there is a
possiblity
a future prospect or potential
possibility
of understanding concepts better by
self
study
.
This
has been
show
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shown
to be true by a survey conducted by University of Inrvine. As per the research, it's proven that kids
cognetial
connected with or engaged in or sponsored by or used in commerce or commercial enterprises
commercial
abilities will be improved by
self
study
instead
of combined studies.
However
, we cannot
rules
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rule
out the possibility of benefits of group
study
as well.
Finally
, my take is we have to carefully
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
both
self
study
and combined
study
and a combination of them suits well for the younger generation.
However
,
Accept space
,
there should be more open discussion related to
this
is a welcoming one.
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