Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, the environmental problem has raised public awareness. It is believed by many that the government ought to raise the fuel price which is the most effective way to deal with surrounding issues. Personally, I do disagree with

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statement. Apparently,

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have to admit that controlling the price of petrol can reduce the usage of private

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to some extent. It is mainly because some people who usually drive fuel vehicles to work may indeed affected by

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an adjustment. To be specific, they may be more likely to choose another transport like the subway or bus

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of their

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. So, generally, we can see a downward trend in

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number of

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on the road emitting less waste gas which is helpful for the environment.

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,

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method mentioned above does not work in the long term. If the public transport system is well-equipped enough to satisfy every individual’s demand, people may not need to drive their own

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and the traffic jams can be

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solved by doing

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. So more bus routes and more railway stations should be constructed.

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, to decrease air pollution by car exhaust, the more effective way is exploiting clean energy and encouraging electric

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, as what has been illustrated above, it can be confirmed that

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an increase in the fuel price can make some people not use their own

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, from a long-term view, changing the energy resources and improving the public transport system are more effective ways for air pollution.