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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Over the past few decades, technology has greatly
revelutionised
change radically
revolutionized
revolutionize
 our lives and has introduced different modes of
communication
 like using computer, phone and
many
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much
 more. Some people view
this
 as
great way
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a great way
 to communicate and will eliminate the idea of writing letters. I don’t completely agree with
this
 perspective,
although
such
 sources of
communication
 reduces the chance of human error, their unavailability can
also
 cause serious problems.
This
 essay will
firstly
 discuss the benefits of these modes of
communication
 and later the problems it can cause followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin
 with, there’s no denying that technology has made our lives more convenient rather than effortless, as one can now easily communicate with their loved ones within few seconds.
Hence
, it has shortened the distance among people who live abroad.
Secondly
, in offices the employees write mails and send them instantly to the concerned person which indicates a trouble-free way to deliver the information rather than writing letters and posting them manually.
Consequently
, these sources of
communication
 have made the
business
 operations more smooth and reduced the chances of human errors.
For instance
, there are various softwares available online which are responsible for predicting the percentage of human error to occur in a
business
 task and recommend ways to curb it. Despite of all the benefits offered by these modern sources of
communication
, one cannot ignore how much human dependency has radically increased on them. It has become rather difficult for the humans to avoid the usage of these services which has made them indolent
.
Accept space
.
Furthermore
, if these modes of
communication
 are not accessible by employees,
then
 it can pose serious complications for any
business
 operation. People need to be prepared and must know how to
dealt
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deal
 with
such
 problems.
For instance
, it was recently published in a local newspaper that a famous company suffered from a great loss as their
business
 information was not transferred to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 company on time. To sum up, modern modes of
communication
has helped
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have helped
 mankind in many
ways but
Accept comma addition
ways, but
 it is difficult to completely rely on them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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