Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals ; during festivals periods people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagee with this opinion ?

The real meaning of special events,
such
as Christmas and New year, change through
years
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the years
. Nowadays, many people think that these different festivals are just a market event to push people to buy more. I totally agree with
this
topic, people are more
preoccupated
deeply absorbed in thought
preoccupied
by what they will buy for their friends and family than the message given behind it. In
this
essay, I will discuss both parts of
this
question and give the several reasons of my point-view.
First
of all,
media
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the media
is the main factor responsible
to
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for
this
tragedy. Indeed, whereas, they have to remember the meaning of
this
journey. They prefer to advertise
this
day by promoting their
partenairship
the members of a business venture created by contract
partnership
(bands). They give a certain stress to the population because, they have to buy different gifts and plan for the dinner.
For example
, in Christmas the most important festival in the year. Shops are sponsored by
media
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the media
, they diffuse in the TV their different promotions, particularly before the Black Friday. At
this
period of the year, the population starts to buy more than usual and forget that
chrismas
a Christian holiday celebrating the birth of Christ; a quarter day in England, Wales, and Ireland
Christmas
celebrates the birth of the Christ and not the quantity of presents they received.
Thus
, media
plays
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play
an important role in our daily life and on the way we think.
Furthermore
, events are traditionally a day of festivity and happiness. It is in
this
period that people should share the most with others. Many things are prepared help people to enjoy their journey even if they are alone,
such
as concerts or movies.
However
, I believe that each of these festivals
have
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has
a task to be accomplished before being enjoyed. During Aid, a religious day for Muslim people, the
first
thing they gave to do is
priing
so lacking in interest as to cause mental weariness
boring
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and only after that they have the possibility to visit their family and party with them.
Therefore
, the
signification
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significance
of an event should be taught by parents to their children. In conclusion, special days are important to be celebrated. On the one hand, they represent for people happiness and sharing.
On the other hand
, they have a meaning behind and
this
signification should be cultivated through the different generation.
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