There seems to be increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent many people believe that the other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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urgeoning

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The burgeoning crime rate

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rate is one of the most significant concerns among all the nations on the planet.

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, some people view

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penalty as the most suitable punishment for the

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ffenders whereas,

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offenders, whereas

other people state that other measures if implicated would be more fruitful. In my view,

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penalty for the

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breakers is not appropriate all the time, it is applicable esoterically and other measures should be employed to manage

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menace. Undeniably, capital punishment seems to be a decisive perspective,

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enforcement there would be fear among the citizens who do not abide t

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would result in establishment of complete

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and order in the state.

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, United Arab Emirates is

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a continent where the

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rate is less than one percent, since

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50 years as they have been using the

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sentences as their main punitive approach. If

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strong measures are not employed,

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it would become i

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to alleviate the

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issues.

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, in some people’s view other methods of enforcing the

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through lofty fines or forced social work are more conducive approaches f

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ffenses.

place of business where professional or clerical duties are performed

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offences

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is because, for a traffic violation, capital statement seems to be irrational whereas, fines and forced social work could be more fruitful in terms of diminishing the traffic o

ffenses.

a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

offences

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,

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approach has been cardinally successful in the developed countries

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the UK

Canada and USA where judges prefer to imply

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the law

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aforementioned measures as compared to rigorous approaches. In conclusion, in my opinion,

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eath penalty

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the death penalty

is not appropriate for every o

ffense.

a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

offence

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, other approaches

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as fines and community services seems to be more viable and promising for the betterment of the society and tackling the

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rate.