IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7.5

Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

#air #transport #export #fruit #vegetables #countries #season
The use of Aeroplanes has been increased to transfer produce to countries where they are impossible to be grown or are out of season. While it
cost
 too much to import vegetables and fruits by air, these are antidotes of many diseases that can be cured by them. The primary drawback of importing produce by air is that it takes too much money to deliver the goods to its destination.
That is
 to say that Airplanes fuel
cost
 is much higher than the other means of transport,
such
 as rail or ship.
For example
, Avocado
cost
 three times more than in Pakistan than to its original
cost
 in the United States of America. The main benefit of importing produce from other countries is that they reach within much less
time
 around the globe.
This
 is because Airplanes take much less
time
 as compared to ships or trucks and because they reach in less
time
 so the chances are higher that it will be delivered in the same condition as they were in the home country.
Furthermore
, some of these vegetables work as a medicine for some people who face heart or other health issues. So importing them by Airplanes takes less
time
 to reach to the patient who needs them to cure their disease.
For instance
, a recent report from the University of Karachi revealed that Brooklyn is good for those people who are facing depression problems because it gives strength to the brain to tackle the problems of life. In conclusion,
although
 importing vegetables and fruits from different countries by air
cost
 too much, it is really helpful for those who need them to save their lives.
Submitted by saifuddin.abdulrehman on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: