Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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History

, Science and

Technology

both subjects are very important. There is an argument between the two groups of people. A few numbers of people claim that

History

is a very important

subject

and other community believes that in 21th century, Science and

Technology

is more significant

subject

than

History

. In my opinion, every

subject

is very important to us. People need to know the

history

and

also

need to learn Science and

Technology

to keep pace with the world. In

History

, people know about much

information

Firstly

, they are known about any country’s

history

, culture, religion and much more

information

which are already happening in the past.

For example

, Bangladesh is a democratic country. It has a great

history

. Bangladesh won the Liberation war of 1971. 26th march is the independence day of Bangladesh. Before the liberation war Bangladesh was a part of Pakistan. That time Bangladesh name was East Pakistan. We know

this

information

in a

history

and we

also

know about the culture, religion and many more

information

about Bangladesh. So,

History

subject

is very important to us to know about the past.

On the other hand

, now a day’s Science and

Technology

is more advanced. People are maintaining an international relationship by using

technology

. Every moment, peoples are creating lots of important things by the method of science and using of

technology

. To give an instance, most of the people are using Facebook in recent time. Facebook is a modern

technology

. People can easily communicate with other peoples via Facebook. So, some people claim that science and

technology

is very important in today’s world. In conclusion, every peoples need for knowledge about all subjects. These both subjects are equally important for every person. I think,

history

subject

help us to know the past and Science and

Technology

subject

help us to know about the recent world. So, every person should have knowledge in both subjects.

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