A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter with regard to an article published in your magazine called The

book

that influenced me most. Rich Dad Poor Dad is the

book

I read recently and it influenced me a lot. The author explains how important financial knowledge is in our daily lives. As most people in

this

world struggle financially so writer tries to explain how can we solve

this

problem.

For instance

, the writer said that if we can pay ourselves first we will never face any issue with

money

However

this

book

is well structured and well written so

anyone

can understand it easily.

Also

, the writer added 10 simple steps, if

anyone

can follow those steps

then

they can become rich.

For example

, if we can earn

money

and invest

then

that

money

can work for us 24 hours a day to generate more

money

As a result

, people can grow their wealth quickly. All of those simple steps influenced me a lot. I am not only the person who can be influenced by reading

this

book

anyone

can. As

money

is one of our primary needs and we all are struggling so

this

book

can help

anyone

to get out of

this

situation. I think everyone should read

this

book

to increase their financial knowledge so they can enjoy their life. I am looking forward to hearing from you about my perceptions. Kind regards, Md Monirul Khan Haidher

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task achievement

To enhance task achievement, try to elaborate more on how the book influenced you personally beyond its general content.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph centers around a single idea or theme to improve clarity.

task achievement

The letter maintains a personal and engaging tone suitable for a magazine.

coherence cohesion

There is a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, which contributes to a coherent structure.

coherence cohesion

You included a suitable greeting and closing, adhering to letter conventions.

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

243 words

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