in recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occuring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative ?

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Nowadays,
people
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person's
mentality change a lot and their living style
has been modified
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have been modified
. New roles have been
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since these recents years. In my opinion, people mind
have became
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has become
more open than in the past. In
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essay, I will discuss both parts of
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question and give several reasons of my point-view.
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of all, the main change
occured
come to pass
occurred
is that women have the right to work. Indeed, traditionally, the female roles are to take care of the children and their house. For our ancestor, only the men would work to feed their family, whereas, since the
women
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women's
revolution in the XX century, they have the opportunity to have an occupation.
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, for many of them, they are still underpaid than men.
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, according to the professor Testart, in his article for the CNRS, the amount of the female who have a
job
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increased by 35% since 2003 in France.
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, the possibility to have a
job
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is only one example of their new rights.
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, many people decided to have a child later than a few years ago. Today, children are considered by the new generation like the source of preoccupation and stress,
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, they prefer to have a
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directly after being graduated and to travel around the world in order to discover a new culture.
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, I
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decided
decide
to realise my dreams before becoming a mother by creating my own business and becoming an engineer. I believe that it is a great deal for people to have others project than thinking about the offspring and their future husband or wife.
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, these changes help people to become open-mind because
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of
our grandparents, the objectives of the life were to get married and
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found a big family and certainly not to have a
job
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. In conclusion, the family structure has changed since these recent
year
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years
and new roles make surface. Women have the possibility to have a position and the young generation decided to report the time to give birth. I think that these some ideas of change are positives because they help people to open their eyes and accept more thing in their daily life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Family structure
  • Modern family
  • Extended family
  • Nuclear family
  • Same-sex parent families
  • Breadwinner
  • Caregiving responsibilities
  • Family dynamics
  • Globalization
  • Economic shifts
  • Migration
  • Child-free lifestyles
  • Cohabitation
  • Traditional marriage
  • Perceptions
  • Homemaker
  • Communication
  • Shared activities
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