Some people think that media (newspapers) should publish information of people's private lives. While, others think newspaper should be controlled so that they don't publish news on people's lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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'Right to freedom' and 'right to express' are basic pillars for media to report the details. At times, it may lead to dishonour 'right to privacy' though. Compromising anyone's private space

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may compromise one's security sometimes. Certainly, few personalities are social figures and their actions can lead to motivate many.

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, proper guidelines should be established for the media and should be imposed consistently. E.g.

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Publishing

any news regarding an event to

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commence officially

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a fitness house by a celebrity or a

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may attract many followers and can

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give a tough time to the security personals and organizers.

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may create a havoc at times, and may end up in a stampede causing more damages.

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, if the details of the event can be published without precise plan, and fans are

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having much knowledge or education

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later about the overall objectives and initiatives by the celebrity.

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may still help the purpose to make people aware

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the social cause. Every trait comes with pros and cons, and so is media reporting.

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a job to be handled with maturity

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with the experience, but a group of seasoned professional setting up

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guidelines and a body to ensure the practice, would

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help the objective of 'publish for public'.

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