Some people think that media (newspapers) should publish information of people's private lives. While, others think newspaper should be controlled so that they don't publish news on people's lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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'Right to freedom' and 'right to express' are basic pillars for media to report the details. At times, it may lead to dishonour 'right to privacy' though. Compromising anyone's private space

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can not

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cannot

be justified, in

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fact, it

may compromise one's security sometimes. Certainly, few personalities are social figures and their actions can lead to motivate many.

Hence

, proper guidelines should be established for the media and should be imposed consistently. E.g.

publishing

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Publishing

any news regarding an event to

inaugrate

commence officially

inaugurate

a fitness house by a celebrity or a

support

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supportive

personality

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may attract many followers and can

further

give a tough time to the security personals and organizers.

This

may create a havoc at times, and may end up in a stampede causing more damages.

On the other hand

, if the details of the event can be published without precise plan, and fans are

infomred

having much knowledge or education

informed

later about the overall objectives and initiatives by the celebrity.

This

may still help the purpose to make people aware

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the social cause. Every trait comes with pros and cons, and so is media reporting.

This

a job to be handled with maturity

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expresses the means used

with

a sense of onus for any consequences. Reporters learn

this

over

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the job

with the experience, but a group of seasoned professional setting up

such

guidelines and a body to ensure the practice, would

definitley

without question and beyond doubt

definitely

help the objective of 'publish for public'.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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230 words

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