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1. Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Some people say that international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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International
tourism
 is one of the biggest industries in the world. If someone is visiting another
country
 without his/her living
country
that is
 called
tourism
. When people cross borders in order to visit
another
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another country, there’s
country
 there’s advantages and disadvantages at the same time. Those pros and cons can affect many areas
such
 as culture, economy,
beliefs etc
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beliefs, etc.
beliefs etc.
… According to Baral, S.
(
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(
1981) he has mentioned that five hundred percent of the tourist has increased from 1976 and in 1979 it has amounted to seventy-five billion dollars.
Tourism
 has increased due
of
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to
 various factors
such
 as development of aircraft facilities, online booking of hotels,
increasement
 of eye-catching places
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
….
however
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However
, it is believed that
tourism
 forms cultural
tension
therefore
this
 essay will outline whether
tourism
 forms cultural tensions or whether it makes people closer and more understandable about one’s
cultures
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culture
 and respect them. As you can see
cultural
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the cultural tension
tension
 is made up of two words. What is culture?
it
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It
 is a way of life shared by people.
Tension
 is a feeling that builds up when people doesn’t believe each other.
However
, what causes cultural
tension
? Cultural tensions caused by cultural similarities and differences among social workers, clients, organizations, and society are multifaceted.
(
Accept space
(
yan
the bright positive masculine principle in Chinese dualistic cosmology
Yang
, 2008).
However
, does
tourism
 effects on cultural
tension
 or does it make people understand about cultures? When people cross barriers in order to visit a
country there’s
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country, there’s
 so many advantage’s a
country
 gets,
such
 as it changes people’s life, the way they live, their beliefs etc...
on
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On
 the other hand it increases the economy and have an impact
of
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on
development
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the development
 of the society.

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