1. Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Some people say that international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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International
tourism
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is one of the biggest industries in the world. If someone is visiting another
country
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without his/her living
country
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that is
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called
tourism
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. When people cross borders in order to visit
another
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another country, there’s
country
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there’s advantages and disadvantages at the same time. Those pros and cons can affect many areas
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as culture, economy,
beliefs etc
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beliefs, etc.
beliefs etc.
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1981) he has mentioned that five hundred percent of the tourist has increased from 1976 and in 1979 it has amounted to seventy-five billion dollars.
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has increased due
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to
various factors
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as development of aircraft facilities, online booking of hotels,
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of eye-catching places
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
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however
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, it is believed that
tourism
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forms cultural
tension
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therefore
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this
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essay will outline whether
tourism
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forms cultural tensions or whether it makes people closer and more understandable about one’s
cultures
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culture
and respect them. As you can see
cultural
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the cultural tension
tension
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is made up of two words. What is culture?
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is a way of life shared by people.
Tension
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is a feeling that builds up when people doesn’t believe each other.
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, what causes cultural
tension
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? Cultural tensions caused by cultural similarities and differences among social workers, clients, organizations, and society are multifaceted.
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, does
tourism
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effects on cultural
tension
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or does it make people understand about cultures? When people cross barriers in order to visit a
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country there’s
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country, there’s
so many advantage’s a
country
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gets,
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as it changes people’s life, the way they live, their beliefs etc...
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on
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the other hand it increases the economy and have an impact
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on
development
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the development
of the society.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural exchange
  • mutual understanding
  • economic boost
  • revenue generation
  • job creation
  • language barriers
  • cultural misunderstandings
  • stereotypes
  • preconceived notions
  • environmental degradation
  • friction
  • cultural erosion
  • local traditions.
  • customs
  • international visitors
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