1. Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Some people say that international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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International

tourism

is one of the biggest industries in the world. If someone is visiting another

country

without his/her living

country

that is

called

tourism

. When people cross borders in order to visit

another

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another country, there’s

country

there’s advantages and disadvantages at the same time. Those pros and cons can affect many areas

such

as culture, economy,

beliefs etc

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beliefs, etc.

beliefs etc.

… According to Baral, S.

(

Accept space

(

1981) he has mentioned that five hundred percent of the tourist has increased from 1976 and in 1979 it has amounted to seventy-five billion dollars.

Tourism

has increased due

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various factors

such

as development of aircraft facilities, online booking of hotels,

increasement

of eye-catching places

etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

….

however

Suggestion

However

, it is believed that

tourism

forms cultural

tension

therefore

this

essay will outline whether

tourism

forms cultural tensions or whether it makes people closer and more understandable about one’s

cultures

Suggestion

culture

and respect them. As you can see

cultural

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the cultural tension

tension

is made up of two words. What is culture?

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is a way of life shared by people.

Tension

is a feeling that builds up when people doesn’t believe each other.

However

, what causes cultural

tension

? Cultural tensions caused by cultural similarities and differences among social workers, clients, organizations, and society are multifaceted.

(

Accept space

(

yan

the bright positive masculine principle in Chinese dualistic cosmology

Yang

, 2008).

However

, does

tourism

effects on cultural

tension

or does it make people understand about cultures? When people cross barriers in order to visit a

country there’s

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country, there’s

so many advantage’s a

country

gets,

such

as it changes people’s life, the way they live, their beliefs etc...

Suggestion

the other hand it increases the economy and have an impact

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development

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the development

of the society.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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3 paragraphs

265 words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

cultural exchange
mutual understanding
economic boost
revenue generation
job creation
language barriers
cultural misunderstandings
stereotypes
preconceived notions
environmental degradation
friction
cultural erosion
local traditions.
customs
international visitors

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1. Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Some people say that international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in word, picture, music or films) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In some countries, there are more young people enrolled in work based training instead of attending university. Do the advantage of the situation outweigh the disadvantages.

Restoration of old buildings in main cities involves enormous government expenditure. It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.