Nowadays public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think it is happening? How can this problem be solved?

Due to
the environmental benefits,
demand
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the demand
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of
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public
transport
mediums has
been
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increased with the passage of time.
However
,
currently
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the expenses for public
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of
transportation
are
sky rocketing
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and persistently increasing day by day.
This
essay believes increased
fuel
prices
and enhanced
facilities
in public
transportation
are the main causes for
this
increase
.
However
, some practical
solution
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solutions
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to curb
this
issue will
also
be discussed in the essay. There are two main reasons which are currently contributing
in
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the continuous cost
increase
of public
vehicles
.
Firstly
, the
prices
of
fuel
have
been
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increased as
compare
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to the past time. Since
cost
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the cost
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of
fuel
is
a
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the
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main expense of any
transport
facility, fares of public
transport
are on the rise. In my country, India,
for example
, diesel price
is
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reached
at
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Rs 75 per liter, which was only Rs 10 per liter twenty years back.
Secondly
, nowadays, public
vehicles
are providing
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a plethora of
facilities
to its
travelers
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travellers
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. These
facilities
require extra installation and maintenance
cost
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costs
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, which directly
reflects
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in the fares of public
transportation
. As far as solutions are concerned, first and foremost, governments should provide more patronage for smooth work public
transport
. If governments
increase
their share, it would
be result
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in
the
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reductions
transportation
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in transportation
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prices
.
Secondly
, since extra
facilities
such
as wifi
facility
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facilities
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and
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television
facility
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facilities
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and other unnecessary
facilities
contribute to
increase
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the
transport
price, these options should be removed from public
vehicles
.
Moreover
, the main purpose of public
transport
is to provide
public
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the public
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with travelling which can be achieved without
such
extra options. In conclusion, it is true that public
transportation
is no cheaper for
normal
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public.
This
rise
of
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prices
is pertaining because
costs
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the costs
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of
fuel
consumed by public
vehicles
have been increased and some unnecessary luxurious features are
also
boosting
fares
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the fares
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of
such
vehicles
.
However
,
this
problem can be tackled with the proper support of higher authorities and by removing extra
facilities
from public travelling mediums.

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