Nowadays public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think it is happening? How can this problem be solved?
Due to
the environmental benefits, demand
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the demand
of
public Change preposition
for
transport
mediums has been
increased with the passage of time. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, currently
the expenses for public Add a comma
currently,
mode
of Fix the agreement mistake
modes
transportation
are sky rocketing
and persistently increasing day by day. Correct your spelling
skyrocketing
This
essay believes increased fuel
prices
and enhanced facilities
in public transportation
are the main causes for this
increase
. However
, some practical solution
to curb Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
this
issue will also
be discussed in the essay.
There are two main reasons which are currently contributing in
the continuous cost Change preposition
to
increase
of public vehicles
. Firstly
, the prices
of fuel
have been
increased as Unnecessary verb
apply
compare
to the past time. Since Change the form of the verb
compared
cost
of Add an article
the cost
fuel
is a
main expense of any Correct article usage
the
transport
facility, fares of public transport
are on the rise. In my country, India, for example
, diesel price is
reached Verb problem
has
at
Rs 75 per liter, which was only Rs 10 per liter twenty years back. Change preposition
apply
Secondly
, nowadays, public vehicles
are providing
a plethora of Wrong verb form
provide
facilities
to its travelers
. These Change the spelling
travellers
facilities
require extra installation and maintenance cost
, which directly Fix the agreement mistake
costs
reflects
in the fares of public Wrong verb form
reflected
transportation
.
As far as solutions are concerned, first and foremost, governments should provide more patronage for smooth work public transport
. If governments increase
their share, it would be result
in Change the verb form
result
the
reductions Correct article usage
apply
transportation
Change preposition
in transportation
prices
. Secondly
, since extra facilities
such
as wifi facility
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facilities
and
television Correct word choice
apply
facility
and other unnecessary Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
facilities
contribute to increase
the Change the verb form
increasing
transport
price, these options should be removed from public vehicles
. Moreover
, the main purpose of public transport
is to provide public
with travelling which can be achieved without Add an article
the public
such
extra options.
In conclusion, it is true that public transportation
is no cheaper for normal
public. Correct article usage
the normal
This
rise of
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in
prices
is pertaining because costs
of Correct article usage
the costs
fuel
consumed by public vehicles
have been increased and some unnecessary luxurious features are also
boosting fares
of Correct article usage
the fares
such
vehicles
. However
, this
problem can be tackled with the proper support of higher authorities and by removing extra facilities
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coherence and cohesion
Your introduction and conclusion are present, but can be further developed to provide a more comprehensive overview of the essay. Try to summarize your key points in the conclusion and restate the main topic in the introduction.
task achievement
Your essay provides a complete response to the task with clear and relevant ideas. Ensure that your ideas are fully developed and supported with detailed examples. Also, be cautious about the accuracy of the information provided, such as fuel prices.
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