dq qcSome people consider online study courses better than classroom studies, while others think classroom study is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some
educationalists
believe that
its
it is
it's
better to learn in
class rooms
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classrooms, however
classrooms however
however
other say in order to cope with the modern
world
competition, we have to train students
on
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with
online study materials.
This
essay will agree that
tradional
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
method of learning i-e classrooms
are
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is
the best for the children. So, keeping
this
in mind, we will talk about both sides and
then
I will give my own opinion.
Firstly
classroom learning is a system, to train individuals from their childhood to adult life in-order to train them, how to cope with the
world
. Because, it will not only teach them how to learn
something but
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something, but
how to behave with a large number of people, how to act
accordingly
to certain time tables,
also
to follow deadlines
moreover
the cooperation
teach
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teaches
them how to be a good human being in life, while taking care of other needs.
For example
, in recent research publications, it is proved that children learn much faster in classrooms
this
is because its a
pshychy
that which is responsible for one's thoughts and feelings; the seat of the faculty of reason
psyche
of a man that it performs exceptionally well in a group.
Secondly
, the most important thing is that man is a social animal he is built according to
this
protocol if he does not behave according to set pattern
then
surely he will face difficulties in life later on.
On the other hand
, people prefer to opt for online study courses these days as it saves a lot of money and time. But, obviously there are some drawbacks of
this
approach.
Firstly
,
this
is against man's
nature if
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nature, if
he does not know how to live with other individuals,
then
how he will perform in a group, so,
as a result
he left behind in
this
era of increasing competition.
For example
, if a child has brought up in
a
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an
environment, in which he does not see the
world
pressure of deadlines, strict environment of class, peer pressure, and
also
the aspects of group learning
then
how can he be able to stand on his feet in
this
world
where everyone is in the race of making money. So, he will surely feel left behind which will cause depression and ultimately suicide attempt which are rapidly increasing these days. To conclude, I can say classroom learning is by far the best method to teach individuals, to outperform in an environment, but
also
, helps them to make a person full of abilities which makes them stand out in the society.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To summarize
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