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Some people believe that team sports are very important for children to succeed in their career,others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Team sports are sometimes helpful, sometimes not, but why? People have beliefs that they help in building a child’s
career
, others say it is a waste of time.
Well if
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Well, if
 you look at it, it has both pros and cons of it. Personally, I think
such
 sports do help in making a child successful in their selected
filed
catch or pick up (balls) in baseball or cricket
field
 of
career
. They help build the child’s confidence and self
esteem enabling
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esteem, enabling
 him to do their work a bit better. But at the same time,
such
 sports can
also
 destroy a child’s self-esteem. We are here to discuss it out so let us begin. Football,
also
 known as soccer requires the highest level of
teamwork
 to get the required success. If your child is
in
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on
 the school’s soccer team or any in any other sport that requires
teamwork
,
then
 you do not have nothing to worry about him/her. White collared jobs do need a person who listens to the other staff members and
also
 contributes a lot to the company.
This
 can be quite easy if that person was in a certain sport that required a lot of
teamwork
. The communication skills will help the company improve day in day out which will definitely lead to better success rate in their
career
.
Secondly
, if the student is planning on taking on sports as a
career
 choice,
then
 you’ve got yourself a hundred percent guaranteed successful person, unless he/she messes up. Almost more than 50% of sports require
teamwork
. Having experience of how
teamwork
 actually works, they will not have any trouble settling into their
career
. Looking at team sports from the other point of view is
also
 something to consider. Children are often competitive, usually when it comes to sports. And as a
teenager I
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teenager, I
 can understand that it can
also
 surpass some limits making it an unhealthy competition. In university level, a student can experience an unfortunate incident of maybe, bullied because of the unhealthy competition.
Such
 events can highly discourage a student and highly
crumble their
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crumble, their
 self -esteem.

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