All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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There have been rising a lot of problems caused by burning fossil fuels in the world.
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, some people think that cars using fossil fuels should be regulated and the electric cars should be encouraged
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.
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, I think that cars using fossil fuels
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be banned because it will take a long time to replace and it is necessary in our lives. On the one hand, it is clear that the electric cars are very environmentally-friendly.
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is because they don’t cause the air pollution.
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, when we buy the electric cars, they are very expensive. So, many people
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afford to buy these cars. In
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circumstance, it is more or less impossible to spread the utility of these cars in developing countries.
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, I have asserted my opinion that it has the lack of reality because many people
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buy
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this car
these cars
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, I think that we need many facilities to use the electric cars.
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, for the electric
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, it will take a long time for convenience to have basic systems and It will cost a lot.
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, I think that we
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ban the fossil fuel cars because it is more useful and it is cheap. In conclusion,
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people know the benefits of the electric cars, it is difficult for everybody to utilize it because it is expensive and in reality, many people
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afford to buy it. I think that it is a great idea that all cars are replaced with the electric cars, but it will take a time and we should take into account its utility.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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