It is not appropriate to have pet dog in built up inner city. Do you agree or disagree?

INTRODUCTION- All domestic animals
such
as cow, buffalo,
dog
are more trustworthy than humans and particularly dogs are the most honest and reliable
animal pet
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animal, pet
, which can help people in
manyfold
a pipe that has several lateral outlets to or from other pipes
manifold
ways in any situation.
However
, it is considered by some that it is not appropriate to have dogs in mega cities. In
contradiction i
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contradiction, I
contradiction I
argue that there are no
drawbacks having
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drawbacks to having
this
pet in inner city due to myriad advantages.
Firstly
, if anyone domesticating
dog
it can provide safety
to
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for
them
from
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for
many unethical persons,
such
as
kidnepper
(law) the unlawful act of capturing and carrying away a person against their will and holding them in false imprisonment
kidnapping
kidnapper
, murderers and these
type
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types
of situations are becoming very normal in cities. And as the
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
of
dog
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dogs
a dog
the dog
, to barking towards strangers and biting to them who are
hurting it's
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hurting, it's
owner, people can stay aware and away from these
type
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types
of person. Evidently, it is
oftenly
seen in
news
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the news
on that how
dog
saved their owner's from anti-social persons.
Hence
, they can visit unknown places easily. No
douby
the state of being unsure of something
doubt
that people can make
call
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calls
to police in their turmoil
situations but
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situations, but
it would take time and some time it is
happened
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happening
that
poloce
a point located with respect to surface features of some region
place
police
came after
incident
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the incident
an incident
took place.
In addition
, they can
also
take care of
childre
a young person of either sex
children
in absent of parents
because well
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because, well
trained dogs are available, which can understand and able
to to
in the direction of
to
take actions in various situations,
for example
, in
america
North American republic containing 50 states - 48 conterminous states in North America plus Alaska in northwest North America and the Hawaiian Islands in the Pacific Ocean; achieved independence in 1776
America
, one
dog
saved
life
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the life
of one baby girl, which was going to drop from 4th floor balcony by mistake. Means they are able to play
role
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a role
the role
of a baby sitter.
Hence
, it is useful in city life as parents have less time to take care of their children and have no enough money to pay
baby-sitter
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a baby-sitter
the baby-sitter
. In conclusion, due to following merits,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
tend to deem that having
dog
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dogs
in urban part
is always play
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is always playing
has always played
always plays
a vital role in
humans
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human
human's
life in
manyfold
a pipe that has several lateral outlets to or from other pipes
manifold
ways.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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