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MENU Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples

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Nowadays
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animal rearing is a part of
hobbies some
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hobbies, some
 section of society believes that keeping pets is great for you winners
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however
, other oppose it according to my Prospectus it depends on the pet because some are friendly and few have aggressive nature. On the
first
 hand, the pets like dog, cat and so on play Marvels role in
life
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the life
 of children going to their impressive appearance which easily attract the newcomers more over children can learn
plethora
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a plethora
 of skills from the pets
for instance
 locality, love and how to deal with mentors.
Furthermore
, pets do not get
bore
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bored
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On the other hand
, keeping pets create
few
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little
 hindrance for the children due to aggressive nature. It is evident
by
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from
 the
survey which
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survey, which
 was conducted by Health Organisation most of the families who
have pets their
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have pets in their
 offsprings are suffering from the health issues as well as 20% children were killed by the pets. In
last
 5 years at the world level.
Moreover
, pets like lion crocodiles and snakes are very common in
western
a film about life in the western United States during the period of exploration and development
Western
 Nations. It is
common factor
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a common factor
the common factor
 of health problem among the families. To
conclude it
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conclude, it
 can be said, keeping
dangerous animal
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dangerous animals
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pet
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a pet
 is always
create
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created
creating
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 few pets are suitable
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for
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