Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Teenage is the happiest
period
of life
is what some people believe, while others believe that even though there may be responsibilities, adult
life
is happier. This
essay agrees to the fact that inspite
of added responsibilities Suggestion
in spite
adult
life
is happier. This
essay discusses both the views.
Teenage is the most happy period
in one’s life
is thought by many people. This
is the period
where there is little burden of looking after the family and job, which makes this
period
cherry. However
, it is this
period which
will determine how the future will be, Accept comma addition
period, which
as a result
a highly focussed approach is required for career development and growth. For example
, there is an increase of school dropouts among teenage groups
, which will lead to problems in Suggestion
the teenage groups
future
regarding their employment and social status.
Suggestion
the future
In contrast
, adult
share the responsibility of career, household, family, parents, children, etc. This
added responsibility needs dedication, time and hardwork
. Suggestion
hard work
However
, despite all the added responsibilities, a successful role
of oneself as an employee, husband, father, son will make him more rotary motion of an object around its own axis
roll
deligent
, which brings about a sense of satisfaction and happiness. quietly and steadily persevering especially in detail or exactness
diligent
For example
, even the vedic
system of human Suggestion
Vedic
life
had one important part as ‘Grihasta”, meaning family life
, as it is considered an important phase.
In conclusion, it is often thought that teenage period
is the happiest in one’s life
by some people in comparison to adult
phase due to its responsibilities. However
, the responsibilities and its successful fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
brings
about a sense of joy in Suggestion
bring
adult
, Suggestion
adulthood
as a result
is happier.Submitted by thapasamar20057 on
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